again

again

A Poem by paul
"

toooo short, waiting.

"
ah, alone again
waiting for the wind

to return the muse
from the future

where she improves upon 
the past

© 2010 paul


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very nice piece!

Posted 13 Years Ago


who are you really? I find myself asking the same question again and again.

Posted 13 Years Ago


it had to be a clever muse - funny i didn't figure she fixes pasts in futures - while here you are - etching futures out of the past!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Holy moley, is it you?

Posted 13 Years Ago


yes, makes me think, once you fallow the poem and get the realization you are giving in the poem. "The future where she improves upon the past" some good words, and very true. thanks raining

Posted 13 Years Ago


It is short but it is brilliant :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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. the muse has challenging tasks ... she has to factor in everything ... everything's that's happened in the past and everything that might happen in the future ... i have no doubt that your patience shall pay ... :) ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


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who is she?

nice

Posted 13 Years Ago


your trickster muse must be smiling

Posted 13 Years Ago


yes

Posted 13 Years Ago



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