little drops

little drops of water

make up the big

sea

little lapping waves worship

the moon

tides turn

madness boils

reality fools.

the skies hide the stars

during the day

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. the night is actually the day and the day is actually the night ... but very few people know that ... but it's tough not to be a fool ... very tough ... sometimes i wish i could be fooled ... and i could spend my life just getting fooled ... without realizing it of course ... the trouble is realizing it ... because if we do ... then we have to change ... and be more accommodating ... and feel the pain of the part of us that died every day for the rest of our lives ... indeed, madness boils ...

[Ed Hart]

your words are like flashing blades

[Isolophobe]

Very well woven. Absolutely love the bit about lapping waves. Its more than personifying, its a definition of a being; it implies an existence. So difficult to do that with so few words as you did here.

[Akshat♥]

little things in life make it big later..
really deep..
nice write:)