sides

sides

A Poem by paul

the deals i've made on the other side
of reality

sometimes reveal themselves.

madness claws at my brain
from the inside

© 2011 paul


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sides , surfaces , walls .. somewhere a window , somewhere a door



Posted 13 Years Ago


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- when i'm inside - i walk into walls - there's never reason not to - and you - you just rain madness - from the other side -

Posted 13 Years Ago


i absolutely dig this writing by you Paul..the first three lines were so very well thought.We are such prisoners of reality.



Posted 13 Years Ago


reality is so subjective, I never can pin it completely down

Posted 13 Years Ago


yes, it's hard sometimes to get all the pieces to hold still...i know the space, my friend

Posted 13 Years Ago


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