give me

give me

A Poem by paul

give me the blue
jellybean

and i'll want the red one.

wanting one, when there's a universe 
at my feet

© 2011 paul


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exactly

Posted 13 Years Ago


don't we always want something else or more than we already have?! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


lol any observer of the world would agree. any true observer that is.

Posted 13 Years Ago


great meaning! ur short poems are really good. I'm a fan!

Posted 13 Years Ago


a perfect, shiny little jewel.
it's so nice when jellybeans and universes can coexist with such absolute grace.
ps. go for the red one. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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