TrixieA Story by paulgill6Trixie makes a great journey and, in her new home, encounters many things that are not quite as they were back home.Before her great journey, Trixie lived a contented life with her family
in an ancient farm-hand’s cottage deep in the Worcestershire countryside. She
had several warm, snug corners to sleep or rest whenever she wanted, and food
and drink was always in plentiful supply in the old stone-floored kitchen. If
she thought she’d been basking in the sun or dozing under a blanket for long
enough, Trixie would wander around the farm buildings or into the fields around
the house with her eyes and ears open for interesting rustling or scurrying. She
would often catch little creatures in the barns, fields and hedgerows. Field
mice and voles were her favourites, as she could have fun with them for hours
on end before they finally gave up the game. The young birds she sometimes
caught, with all their flapping and screeching, always got a bit too agitated,
and as Trixie quickly got mildly irritated by all the commotion her games with
them didn’t last as long. Trixie had been a skilled stalker ever since she was
very young; her mother had begun teaching her at a very early age, and had
taken this responsibility very seriously. She had shown Trixie how to move without
a sound, taught her never to take her eye off her prey and the way to approach it
with careful, stealthy steps until she was near enough to pounce. She taught
her how to keep hold of her prey without getting scratched or bitten herself,
and how to recognise the creatures that could hurt her and those that couldn’t.
Trixie had been a quick learner, and very soon had become extremely proficient.
Sometimes when she had been out hunting and had caught a rat or a mouse she was
particularly proud of, she would carry it back to the house in her mouth and leave
it on the kitchen floor as proof of her talent. This had been the essence of her life before her great
journey. But then, at about the time summer was beginning to set in once again,
Trixie’s family had one day loaded the car with suitcases and bags and, when
this was done, had covered them with blankets taken from Trixie’s favourite
nests. Finally, they carefully placed Trixie on top of the blankets. Trixie didn’t
like this much, as she didn’t feel nearly as comfortable as she did in her safe
corners at home, and she didn’t really understand what was happening. After
some time in the car, the movement was making her feel sick and dizzy. The
noise, the heat and the smells were unfamiliar, unsettling and really quite
frightening. The heat grew more oppressive the longer they drove, and Trixie
couldn’t find anywhere away from the blankets; not a cool place in the shade
anywhere. The sunlight poured in through the windows, filling up the car with
its stifling heat. Her family offered her fresh water, but after the first day she
couldn’t even muster up enough energy to drink. Trixie thoughts began to blur;
she had never felt so drained before. Eventually, after the third day, the car finally
pulled into the driveway of a strange house. By this time, Trixie felt so weak that
she could barely make an attempt to get out of the car and into the fresh air. But her family took good care of her. They gently
lifted her from the car and lay her down on a bed in a cool, dark bedroom, and
made sure she had enough food and drink. Day by day, Trixie regained her
strength and eventually began to feel her old self again " after three days she
even went for a recce around the new house. The morning after her recce, her
family came downstairs in swimming costumes, T-shirts and flip-flops, and after
breakfast they left the house with hats and sunglasses and towels hanging
around their necks, and carrying bags of sun cream, magazines, books and beach
games. While they were away, Trixie fell asleep on the sofa, woke up, and
continued to drift in and out of sleep as the day grew steadily warmer. When
her family returned for lunch, Trixie remained where she was while they ate; once
again, she was feeling so hot she wasn’t even hungry. But bit by bit, Trixie
had more to eat and drink, until eventually she was eating and drinking
normally again, and feeling her old self, with a desire to go out and explore
her new surroundings properly. It wasn’t only the temperature she wasn’t used to;
Trixie found many different things in her new environment. The countryside
around the new house was dry and dusty; there were none of the cool, dark
hedgerows or the lush grass she was used to. Trixie heard strange scratching
and rustling noises she didn’t recognise coming from the dry bushes and the
tall, brown grass. At one point she came across what she thought must have been
a mouse, but it looked different to the mice she knew from home: it was skinnier,
had a far more pointed nose and longer, more spindly legs. Trixie had started
to stalk it, but the mouse was quick and alert, and it rapidly scuttled away before
Trixie had got anywhere near it. Trixie returned to her new house and drank some cool
water " stalking here was thirsty work. She retired to a big soft cushion and stayed
there all afternoon " it was too hot to go out now. As evening turned to night and
the temperature slowly dropped, Trixie decided to go out for another wander
around the house, but she didn’t go far, as the night sounds were unfamiliar to
her, and made her slightly wary. A routine had quickly been adopted: her family would leave,
dressed in their beach clothes, and Trixie would stay in the house, quietly
waiting for their return. In the evenings she would go out for a short
exploratory walk. On the seventh day, they had followed the same pattern. By
the time Trixie left the house in the evening, the sun had set and the
temperature was very slowly dropping. She walked around the perimeter of the
garden and, having become a little more courageous, she ventured a little
further and walked carefully past the low bushes and brown grass that surrounded
her new house and those of her new neighbours. She spied a tree which she didn’t recognise, and
headed towards it, with the intention of finding out what interesting creatures
might be lurking around its roots. She was not disappointed. She came across a
long, brown snake, but it slithered away and disappeared into a hole in the
ground between the tree roots before she could even think about capturing it. Trixie
wasn’t too worried about this " she was always fairly cautious with snakes
anyway: she knew that they were capable of giving you a painful bite. She then entertained herself for quite a while playing
with the biggest beetle she had ever seen. It was a dark, shiny brown colour,
had impenetrable armour, thick, strong legs and huge antlers. She patted it,
trapped it with her paw, sent it tumbling across the dead leaves, but the
cumbersome creature would only recover and march away from her at a slow,
plodding pace. Just when she was beginning to get bored with the beetle, she spotted
something she had never seen before in her life. In some ways it resembled the beetle she had just given
up on: it also had a shiny brown body and was of a comparable size, perhaps slightly
larger, and flatter. Instead of antlers it had two strong-looking claws (Trixie
would stay out of the way of those) and a long, narrow tail. It was busy foraging
for things amongst the twigs and stones scattered beneath the tree. Trixie was on full alert. The beetle totally out of
her mind now, she sank down as low as she could go and trained her sight on her
new discovery. She monitored its every move, and saw that it didn’t move
particularly quickly or jerkily, that it was taking its time moving from one
nook to another, methodically looking for food, without showing any interest in
anything else going on around it. For Trixie, this was going to be easy; she
would be able to get right up close to the creature and capture it before it had
any idea of what had happened. Nevertheless, she continued her approach in the
way her mother had taught her and how she always had done with the creatures at
home. The creature continued on its way, still unaware or unconcerned
by anything but its foraging. Trixie advanced in a wide arc to avoid a large
stone that would have blocked her line of vision for a moment and cause her to lose
sight of her prey, albeit momentarily, therefore breaking the golden rule. She carefully
moved one leg at a time, softly putting each foot down and pressing until it
was firm and stealthily continued with her advance. Not a twig snapped under
her step, nor a leaf rustled with her passing " it was an exemplary approach. Once
she got close enough, Trixie sought the best stance by rocking slightly from
side to side before finding the perfect footing. Her eyes were wide, the pupils
dilated, her upper lip quivered. Then, just as the creature looked as though it
was about to wander off again, she pounced, trapping her prey and rendered it
immobile under her front paws. She felt the strange creature squirming to free
itself"it was surprisingly powerful for its size"and she pressed it even harder
against the ground. After a few seconds"it seemed much longer"she carefully eased
the pressure and uncovered some of the creature’s body in order to take a
closer look at its strange features. Trixie noticed that it had eight legs,
like a spider, and a curious segmented tail, which, on being released, was now
curving upwards. On the end of this was a small, but nasty, hook-shaped spike;
Trixie would stay out the way of this too, just in case. She released the creature gradually until it was
completely free, looking forward to a bit of fun, but to Trixie’s surprise it
made no attempt to escape; it held its ground, almost defying her; challenging
her even. Trixie gave it a quick pat with her foot. The creature held its
ground. She gave it a harder pat, sending it tumbling sideways a few inches,
but the stubborn creature righted itself and, again, stood its ground, its
claws outstretched and its tail arched over its body. Trixie was going to find
this game, with an opponent that was standing up to her like this, much more
exciting. She pounced on the creature a second time, trapping it as she had
done before, and immediately sent it reeling with a powerful blow. The contest continued, but Trixie’s opponent showed no
signs of admitting defeat; quite the opposite: it was becoming increasingly valiant,
threatening her with its claws and even making charges at Trixie. No matter how
many times she sent the creature reeling, instead of scuttling off, as she
would have expected, it righted itself and came back for more. Trixie’s pats
and blows got increasingly more violent as she wondered how long it would be
before the creature would start showing signs of tiring. It was only after several
spins across the ground and collisions with roots and stones that the creature’s
returns to its adversary began to get more laboured: it wasn’t standing so
proud now, and was noticeably walking with some difficulty " it looked to
Trixie as though it might even have lost one of its legs. When the creature was obviously not up to the contest
anymore, Trixie turned it on its back and placed a paw over its underside and felt
its strength subsiding and the squirming diminish until she no longer felt any
movement at all. She then released the creature and flipped it over, but the
creature just lay there, inert. She took it in her mouth and closed her sharp
teeth over the creature’s body, but just as the power of her jaws began pushing
her teeth into the creature’s hard shell, its tail lashed up and the point
drove into Trixie’s lower lip dealing her an excruciating sting. Trixie recoiled violently, hurling the creature from
her mouth through the air, sending it crashing against the tree trunk. But the
pain continued to surge across her face and to the back of her head. She felt an
intense burning working its way down into her neck and across her shoulders. A
few seconds later, as the fiery pain was biting into her chest and working its
way over her back, Trixie’s legs suddenly gave way and she slumped down onto
the dry twigs and leaves. The intense burning in her muscles and her veins gave
way to a numbness that crept over her whole body and her vision began to swim
and darken. As she lay there, her world turning rapidly to darkness, she thought
she faintly heard her family calling out her name in the distance. They sounded
anxious, and Trixie vaguely thought she’d get up and go over to them, to let
them know that she was alright. But her body didn’t respond the slightest bit to
her will. Slowly, as the pain subsided, a heavy cloudiness enveloped
her mind and weighed upon her body. Trixie slipped inescapably into a deep,
dark sleep, and dreamt of dozing contentedly beneath a cool, shady Worcestershire
hedgerow.
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One warm evening, shortly after the sun had gone down,
a group of boys playing football on the rough ground behind a housing estate came
across a dead cat under a carob tree while they were looking for their ball.
Not knowing who it belonged to, they picked it up and tossed it down a nearby manhole. © 2015 paulgill6 |
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Added on October 21, 2015 Last Updated on October 21, 2015 Tags: new environment, new home, journey, discovery Authorpaulgill6Oxford, United KingdomAboutBack-tracking on the road to Hell by making the good intentions I had -to write some half-decent fiction- reality. more..Writing
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