Yours truly

Yours truly

A Poem by Jake Breslauer

sutilties in the mind
transfixed with the divine
and possibly fictionally
these ideals are fixable
and easily bent
to meet the most resent trend
this message is not heaven sent
but derived from facts
proven by tracks
that were laid in the path
by non biblical names
creating logical frames
living true human pains
that stay true to the census
and I'm trying to make sense of this
life that I'm in
being told I'm living in constant sin
choosing to alter the blood of my kin
letting my true life begin
in a world without hate
and a different faith
that isn't perpetuated by fear
and verbal brutality towards the queer
and the naturally colored
considering everyone my brother
makes me an ignorant f****r
but I don't care
as I long I can share
my message of love
these scriptures are sent from yours truly, and not from above.
 

© 2008 Jake Breslauer


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So well said and beautifully written. I particularly liked these lines:

in a world without hate
and a different faith
that isn't perpetuated by fear
and verbal brutality towards the queer
and the naturally colored
considering everyone my brother
makes me an ignorant f****r

Good piece. Thanks for the great read!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Jake Breslauer
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eastsound, WA



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