Making Most Of The Inner Ghost

Making Most Of The Inner Ghost

A Poem by pheasant
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Is the hourglass running out, or balancing out?

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Do we focus on the changes and the turmoils of the times


 

Or do we focus on the reasons and rhymes


 

Leading us with signs


 

Which intertwine

 


In our minds


 

Making most

 


Of the inner Ghost

 


Which will clear the coast

 


By passing out it's own jellied toast

 


And feeding feathered fawns on lawns foremost?



© 2012 pheasant


Author's Note

pheasant
Pondering on perplexities of the times

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I like the movement of words and the statements.
"Do we focus on the changes and the turmoils of the times
Or do we focus on the reasons and rhymes"
Sometime we need to focus on reason and rhymes. Turmoil is always with us. A poem that open the door to a good conversation. A excellent poem.
Coyote




Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A complex thought..there are so many issues one can't focus on them all but in order to take action one must find focus somewhere. Love the hourglass shape...you have given me something to think about today.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very witty poem with a great flow... I agree do we focus on the problem or the solution? Unfortunately it is usually the former of the too otherwise this world would not be in trouble.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the movement of words and the statements.
"Do we focus on the changes and the turmoils of the times
Or do we focus on the reasons and rhymes"
Sometime we need to focus on reason and rhymes. Turmoil is always with us. A poem that open the door to a good conversation. A excellent poem.
Coyote




Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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