December Song

A poem in which i tried to express how beautiful winter can be.

Lingering in the sweet, pale sunrise,

Gracing the frosted world with a delicate harmony

 

Pure and soft beneath these melancholy skies, hopeful

despite the resentment of the cold

 

Angelic, aching notes dance over fresh snow,

Radiant, breathtaking… winter

 

Reflected in the mirror-bright icicles,

Symphonies of delicate threnody

 

Offering tentative charity:

a moment of compassion, hope,

 

And warmth

 

Reviews

[HoWiE]

Yeeeeahhh... very nice. You have used some really lovely phraseology here and some perfect words to conjour up a crisp winter morning. I love winter mornings when everything is cold, silent and sterile - wonderful.

I loved the first line: 'Lingering in the sweet, pale sunrise, Gracing the frosted world with a delicate harmony'

Frosted world - how perfect is that! Very... cakey, lol.

Very nicely written, a sparkling piece of poetry - thanks! HoWiE ;-)

[Gandré]

awww this is good!
I truly can imagine this December cold and snowy....you wrote a charming poem, it is even tended and evocative. I like those lines:

Angelic, aching notes dance over fresh snow, brilliant,
Radiant, lustrous, breathtaking… winter----------------------------it is like a picture. great cuttie poem.