too many ideas

too many ideas

A Poem by Pinky

 

 

 

So many thoughts

Distraught

Cant figure out a plot

 

Its not lack of vision

Ideas aren’t falling into place

Not lacking inspiration

Everything seems to be misplaced

 

I am stressing

Making it worse

Breath don’t be obsessing

Maybe try free verse

 

If only for a plan to provoke

Too many thoughts going round

try to relax, try the good smoke

Inhale and exhale, calm down

 

F**k now I want to go to bed

Whelp I guess I will sleep on

All these thoughts in my head.

© 2008 Pinky


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And if you are like me, the moment you start top fall asleep, all the words will start running through you head, almost in an insane way. You describe writers' block very well. Keep up the good work!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice rhyme sceme and flow... i really liked that... writers block can be a b***h somtimes.... but at least you got a nice poem out of it!!! Nice work!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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