I need a lobotomy

 

I need a lobotomy

Maybe then I won’t feel pain

Escape from life’s agony

Through lacking my frontal brain

 

I constantly analyze

Thoughts run circles round and round

Searching through bullshit and lies

Ideas cause stress and compound

 

Things so insignificant

boring, senseless and dumb

Thinking is a toxicant

I long to be slow and numb

 

A frontal lobotomy

Will help meditate

The lube for life’s sodomy

Will darken a world of hate

 

I am yearning to be blind

A dull idiotic fool

To comfort a perplexed mind

Never to think only drool

 

I need a lobotomy

True I might not be that smart

Trivial anatomy

Reasoning makes me lose heart

Author's Note

Its open

Reviews

[Kimberly]

I like this one a lot. Sometimes you do envy those who seem to never be concerned over things, who just float on the water of life, and never seem to care. I myself wonder at people who seem to be do confident, the people that never seem to go back and think about every conversation they had that day and analyze what they said, how they said it, and what they should have said instead. I stay up late at night kicking myelf over stupid things like that and I, too, wish there was a way just to shut my brain off. But, if we didn't have the "overactive" brain, would we have anything to write about?

Now, for creative criticism. Line Seven - it should be through, not threw. Line Ten - stupid and dumb meaning the same, perhaps the second word should be something else.

By the way, love the avatar!

[Pinky]

i wrote this a yr ago and going back and rereading it.... i have stopped worryin about the small stuff and try to only worry about large problems now... ne ways... thts all

[~*666 Draven Von Tepes ..]

I wish i could make your pain g oaway

[Wolfwind Words]

That was really good Pink! It had great flow and told a fantastic story. It seemed to me that this told of how we as human beings are always over thinking, over analyzing and mulling over things, that would probably better if we just went with the flow.

Great Poems!

Aaron