morn

best if read aloud!

 

Another morn

Filled with decay

I rise and ache

Feeling hostile

 

I feel scorn

Everything’s gray

Living is fake

So is my smile

 

For I am torn

Wilting away

Every day break

Begins denial

 

The worlds reborn

Another day

Swallow and take

How this worlds vile

Author's Note

please read it aloud... it sounds best that way....

Reviews

[Alya Usman]

A very nice flow. And yes, reading it aloud makes it even more beguiling. Keep up the good work ^^

[Wolfwind Words]

It does sound better aloud.
The effect is making life seem like gum, that has lost it's flavor and color and is just being chewed because it's there. And we don't want to take the time to spit it out. Just what I got out of it. :)

Aaron