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A Poem by Kristen

I will f**k you like a w***e
Because I had a bad day
And I need you to make me feel better.

I will scream
And you will let me,
Crouched as you are
in the corner.

I'm really not an a*****e
I'm just misunderstood
The sound of leather snapping
Is so refreshing, don't you think?

How I love leather.
Strained material
Stretched to its limit
Any tighter and it'll break
Just like me.
 

© 2008 Kristen


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Well I do beleive I will be an avid reader of yours from now on. Each word in this poem has a vital part to play, and each word is heavy with power. It's lovely and meanacing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice. I can really tell that you were feeling angry. The emotions were woven so strongly in every single word. The last stanza's my favorite. lol. Keep up the great work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow. You really make this scene stick out in my mind. I can imagine a dungeon with a s and m type of thing going on. Great job kristen!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice write...strong

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kristen
Kristen

Glenwood Springs, CO



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I'm a 30-year-old writer who has been writing for longer than I can remember. Previously published works have been mostly articles, although some of my poetry was published in my college literary jou.. more..

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A Poem by Kristen