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A Poem by Kristen

Sound of silence
reverberates throughout
the apartment -
forcing me into mind
less activity. I scrub dishes.
Pale water washes away
crusted thoughts of you.
 

© 2008 Kristen


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This poem gives me a feeling of frustration a woman feels with a man who is never home. Unable to get out of the house, or nowhere to go more likely, drives you to a depression and a willingness to part ways. I like this small poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A short blurb of life.
Nothing fancy and ornate is needed to make the poem masterful.
Wonderful work!

I especially like how you use your punctuation.
You know, in the middle of lines instead of always at the end.
Very Millay-esque.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The poem paints a picture of a person who has to go through tough times like doing menial work for minimum wage. Good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kristen
Kristen

Glenwood Springs, CO



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I'm a 30-year-old writer who has been writing for longer than I can remember. Previously published works have been mostly articles, although some of my poetry was published in my college literary jou.. more..

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A Poem by Kristen