leave if you must, just

don't laugh
too loudly

our friends
might hear us
through

these thin walls

Reviews

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thank you Pkuhl....for submitting your work to the contest but like i had asked for can you add another line to make it 7 lines please?!
Please hurry just one more day to close down shop!:)

[p.kuhl]

the title is a prescribed line, so I consider this to be a finished seven line poetry...

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

i can understand that....but for that you have to rewrite the title in the textbox....i advise you to speedily edit the same...
anyway the voting opens today and i wont have a say anymore in the selection...:)

[Marri]

Strong words! I can see the perverse, hysteric laughter that is stuck on a face which is supposed to be sad. I like how you have expressed contradiction (so well that it sounds like a constatation)

[Elizabeth]

This is my kind of work. Volumes are spoken in the few syllables you chose. Economy of language is a beautiful thing...