Promise to succes

Promise to succes

A Poem by new worlds last thought

From the weight on my head, to the ground on my feet

The world starts to crush me while I think I’m beat.

All that I thought, all that I’ve done

I am not ready just to turn and run.

 

I don’t want to give up, I will not give in

I’ll try my best to beat you to prove that I can win

No one will stop me, nothing is in my way

I will work my hardest, for myself to see that day

© 2010 new worlds last thought


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Good personal motivation. If more people had that type of intestinal fortitude, there'd be a lot less strife in the world. You phrased this very well.

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i am just trying to find my way in this world. I feel like i'm just living life in fear. i have been able to over come small mounds of fear. even though this sounds like the basic teen story. i .. more..

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