Much

Much

A Poem by yourhaircutman

I want too much.

I want the new, the old,

the future, the past.

I want smiles and tears.

I want the sea, as well as the burning

pits of lava kept tucked away under

our feet.

I want the world.


But I'd gladly give this all up to see

you walking through my door.

© 2012 yourhaircutman


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brilliantly built up piece with anticipation for a most delightful surprise ending, you put a lot of honest passion into this, and it could not be more eloquent, every line brought more pleasure to the reader.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Hmm, I enjoyed reading this very much- it's amazing how we seem to be happily willing to sacrifice so much for another person to return to our lives - good work! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on July 30, 2012
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Tags: pleasewritehome, much, nostalgia, life, sad, girl, love, want, world, sea, fire

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