i haven't thought of one yet. :)

this was originally an assignment for my spanish class when we did poetry. we read bequer, and this is my interpretation on one of his poems, or, well, more of a response to it. the spanish is posted as well, for those interested. :)

This question is eternal,

he whispers, clinging to what’s left.

Eternal like… us.

His lips burn when he asks the

Space between them –

“Darling, what have you really

been thinking?” Her pause

strikes his ears like a bomb.

She turns to him.

He looks away.

“More importantly, what

have you told them?”

Another bomb of uncertainty.

 

 

 

Esta pregunta es eternal,

el susurra se pega a lo que

queda.

Eterna como… nosotros.

Sus labios queman cuando

el pregunta el aire entre ellos,

“Mi amor, que ha pensado… de

mi?” La pausa de ella golpea

sus orejas como una bomba.

Ella voltea a el.

El mira de aqui.

“Mas importantemente,

que ha hablando a ellos?”

Un otra bomba de duda.

Author's Note

I didn't know how to do the upside down question mark on the computer. If you know, please tell me. :)

Reviews

[Steffi]

No comprehde espanol. xDDDDDD

THe english that us NORMAL english speaking americans can understand was really well written. the spanish sucked :DDD JKJKJKJKJKJKJKJKJKJKJK you know i love you :DD

[Sarah]

Hm, I'm not sure about the question mark, I guess try copying and pasting it from google translation or something? xD Anyway, this poem was very beautiful in both languages - great job. ^_^