Please Help Me

Just boredom really.

Please help me,

please help me,

to make this right,

 

please help me,

please help me,

to reach the light,

 

please help me,

please help me,

to find my mind,

 

please help me,

please help me,

to write in rhymes,

 

Please help me,

please help me,

to do what i need,

 

Please help me,

please help me,

to become a lead,

 

please help me,

please help me,

just to show,

 

please help me,

please help me,

to show all I know,

 

please help me,

please help me,

to make lives better,

 

please help me,

please help me,

to have words graceful as feathers,

 

please help me,

please help me,

to write this all down,

 

please help me,

please help me,

please give me my crown.

Reviews

[Emily Paige]

This is great I like this alot.

[Krista]

Its a good poem. I found it kinda strange how you repeated ever verse but I am not one to talk as I have done that before. I would like to get to know you better honestly