Raw poem "Scream"

this poem is raw and OOC, just my inner thoughts written out as prose.... read and comment... i know you want to the red words also create another poem inside itself... inside my thoughts...

 

 

 

Scream.

Come on self, Scream

Just open your mouth and raise your voice

Shriek until you’re hoarse

Let they hear what they deserve

Let them hear your bitten down words

That course so happily through your mind and veins

Scream.

Come on self, don’t take it.

Don’t agree with what they say.

Those ignorant losers,

Show them who’s right

Let it all out, its right there on your tongue.

Scream

They call you a b****

They call you a f**

A m***** f*****

And much much more

Those backstabbing girls

With their rumors flying around

About you.

No, don’t say “I know”

Or “too bad”

Don’t be all “cool”

Or all tough

Don’t keep it in

SCREAM!!!

 

 all the red words equal the followign poem as well

 

Scream.

Scream.

Just open your mouth and raise your voice

Shriek what they deserve, your bitten down words

Scream

Don't take it

ignorant losers Show them

Let it all out,

Scream.

backstabbing girls

their rumors flying around you.

Don’t keep it in

SCREAM!!!

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[shandi]

Definitely liked part one the most I guess because it seemed to say alot more. Ive had these thoughts about whether you feel the need to speak up and defend someone, something that probably wont be agreed upon by others (but you never know), or just let it slide and stay out of it. Definitely not good to keep it in!!