Eyes

Eyes

A Poem by poetdweller

 

Eyes Eyes

                  Blue stone Blue stone

             Show no pain Show no pain

      But they're all alone But they're all alone

             Show no pain Show no pain

                  Blue stone Blue stone

   Eyes Eyes

© 2008 poetdweller


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Amazing creativity. I find it interesting that you chose blue for the color of the eye you created instead of hazel, like the eye that was pictured.

One thing you did miss, however:
"But their all alone But their all alone" -- their should be "they're"

Otherwise, this is a very nicely done and unique piece. Props.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Amazing creativity. I find it interesting that you chose blue for the color of the eye you created instead of hazel, like the eye that was pictured.

One thing you did miss, however:
"But their all alone But their all alone" -- their should be "they're"

Otherwise, this is a very nicely done and unique piece. Props.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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