Red

 

Red,

That’s all it was

The deep crimson

 

 

The pain wrenches through

The bloody silence

The silence that looms

Like a greedy beast to strike

To let make them shriek.

To shriek until their throats are raw,

Bloody and torn.

And then the laugh.

It enjoyed watching your pain.

Oh so very much

Its gut wrenching jubilance

     And all his friends

Hate them all

All of those ignorant losers

Tell them the pain they give you

End it all

Reviews

[WordMaster]

Interesting plot line! The hero being watched� laughed at� getting bloody for the enjoyment of others�. Should he end it all? I think not. Go on and regain the pride that is deep within.