New freewrite-- EPIC FAIL!!!

I almost chuckle softly
All the cliches I could use this moment....

I've fallen and I can't get up
I'm drowning in my tears
HA! I can cliche quite nicely,
Though, the sad thing is
Its truly how I feel.
Dang.

I'm in a deep abyss
I can't see the end
So I want to make it end
Isn't this easy?!
Anybody, or a nobody like me
Can write poetry.

Would I like a side of epic
With my fail?
Yes, yes I would.
Because I'm an epic failure.
Once a failure
Always a failure.
FAIL.

I'm a drowning fish
In a world of hate and lies
I should be doing great
The water's looking fine,
But I'm a drowning fish
And I'm going to die.

Why?
Why do the voices speak so loudly?
In the middle of the night
Telling me these things...
Showing me the truth...
Its all my fault
I'm all alone.
I'm
gonna
Fail.

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[Chrystal Gallenger]

I have felt this way, and people have made me believe this. It's a hard feeling to overcome; failure.