There�s color in my laundry all because of you.

There�s color in my laundry all because of you.

A Poem by Ryan "rat" Travis
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Something I wrote for my wife before we started getting serious.

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At the time I met you
my laundry was black
like my life
shades of grey
but mostly
black

I could sit there watching my laundry tumble
and see nothing but black
occasionally a flash of color from my underwear
(which is another metaphor for my life at the time)
black
with occasional flashes of brilliance from out my a*s
little flashes of fleeting happiness
but otherwise
dismal

A long time ago
my life had color and happiness
I eagerly awaited Christmas as much as my children
but things grew dark after 9 years
and the black set in

The year I met you,
was the first year I had a tree for Christmas in a very long time.
I resisted
but the spark was there

This is the happiest I�ve ever been
and
the color is back in my laundry

© 2008 Ryan "rat" Travis


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I can't describe how this made me feel. it was powerful in such a subtle way, and it made my heart pound a little harder and my eyes moisten just a tad. The imagery... it was just so overwhelmingly good. Especially the part about the Christmas tree; I adored that.

A wonderful, wonderful read. Thank you.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Ryan "rat" Travis
Ryan "rat" Travis

Salem, MA



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Ryan is an accomplished poet, in 14 years hes performed all over New England, as well as New York, New Jersey, Pennsylvania and Kentucky. Published in many magazines and online publications, Ryan's po.. more..

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