Suicide Poetry

I wrote this a while back in response to the endless sea of poets who write s****y poetry but dramatically deliver it to make it sound better than it is; like Maya Angelou.

He�s�a�
graduate..
of the..
Shatner�School�
of�
poetry reading�
with..a..
minor�
in�
Adam West.
He.. pulls�
each word�
a..
veteran..
of the�
dramatic�
pause�
ever�so�
important..
each�word�
so�
critical�
so� smooth�
is each..
line�
it�s almost�
like..
sweet..
cream..
but the�
pause.. loses..
the..
meaning�
the�
pausing..
never..
stops..
and..the..
piece�
grows..
too...long
it�s..
poetic..
suicide.

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I was hearing shatner recite this .. i think it is a wonderful poem and such a great title ..
Grows too long and too poetic .. i can see how it would with shatner ..

Chloe
xoxo

[Brett Campaigne]

hahaha, the poem was not typical of your title or disclaimer, and it made for a very surprising, not to mention funny, read. I totally concur!

[Poeticpiers]

you demonstrate very clearly what you mean with your presentation. Its meter not dramatic pases which make a piece of writing poetry