Something.....

it just is

 

This is the beginning

of the ending

the middle of the

candle burning both ways

Today, tonight is the end

of many days

and

I just can't say

I feel just too kinda right

just pass on by

and

give some energetic

light

to get moving

throw some

poetic hype to make a sistah keep grooving

this is the beginning

of the ending

the middle of the candle burning both ways

today, tonight is the end

of many distraught days

 

Poeticvixen(c)2011

Reviews

[Rikkevi Rue]

ain't it so...hope is a flame lit by our own hand. Sure ain' noone goin do it for you! I say right on, poetic (and truthful) ink

[Jibey]

Powerful, poignant and arresting... I like

[POETIC VIXEN]

sugata m...i bow...

[SUGATA M]

beautiful expression of feeling

[POETIC VIXEN]

thank u all....

[Walk away slow poet]

I know these feelings. Amazing writing here.

[Thea]

Very nice poem...Such a beautiful picture you put in there...
:)))

[MS. BABy]

I to tally understand...thank u for this write