Among the Twinkling Stars

sometimes the world falls away, as the heart beats, and love is displayed

Drift with me upon a silvery sea

The shimmers with amethyst flare

In an array of magnetic hues

 

Dance upon the silhouetting clouds

Of multiple every changing shapes

As the earth simply falls away

 

Get lost in the mystical moment

As the universe aligns two souls

Casting a spell binding love

 

A potion the emanates a glow

Of unfathomable scarlet red

That sings with the hearts tones

 

For a moment, this moment

A world of spying intruders

Are banished from entering in

 

In this magical dreamscape

The outside is vanished from sight

While we embrace each other

Among the twinkling stars

Reviews

[Veronica Chandler]

The sparkle of mandalas bright and kaleidoscopic colors are dancing in my minds eye as I read this lovely piece.
" Drift with me upon a silvery sea
The shimmers with amethyst flare
In an array of magnetic hues"
The ideas of amethyst flare punctuates this sweet piece.

[Poetic Beauty]

I like to write about the universe and drifting into magical places with that special person. I love to use color to bring about certain emotions and let the mind picture color.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

So beautiful :)

[Poetic Beauty]

thanks

[Seanh12]

A beautiul poem with hope and faith. Good use of description. I like the ending. Thank you for this great wonderful poem. I like it.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for taking the time to read

[Zachary_James]

Oh my this is breathtakingly stunning, this is a fabulous piece.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. Those moments when the world melts away and only two people are in the room.

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

sometimes doing that is all we can, escaping into merging, with nature, our lovers, the universe. maybe it's immersion and not escape, I'm not really sure.

[Poetic Beauty]

You might be right. Those moments when they happen are quite amazing.

[E.V. Black]

How breathtakingly beautiful! Poetic Beauty, this was some great poetic beauty.
The imagery is extremely rich. I did detect a few mistakes, but the poem's beauty overrides the smallest of mistakes.

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad you enjoyed this poem. I will look it over and see if there are mistakes. Sometimes the idea flows and my brain is working faster than my fingers and being who I am I forget to look it over.

[E.V. Black]

Heh, I do that too.

[Jack...]

Very beautiful, this piece glisten like the sun reflecting off of a still lake. Very nice

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. Ahh those are beautiful moments as well.

[Aehr]

wow, what imagery! I love this. You really painted a picture here. :)

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad you enjoyed the descriptions in this piece.

[Aehr]

:) And I'm glad you wrote this piece!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. I had to read again for the pleasure of the good description.
"Get lost in the mystical moment
As the universe aligns two souls
Casting a spell binding love"
I like the ending. Good to find peace among the twinkling stars. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I have moments with my guy like this. It seems the world falls away and it is just the two of us.

[Larry Dyson]

beautiful!