Magic Waters

The water nymph swam fast
In the deep ocean blue
Her bewitching did last
On the unsuspecting crew

Ships wayfarer got lost
running ships into streams
Their minds got crossed
Heart splitting at the seams

The keen magic soon was gone
The men's minds were clear
Like nothing was wrong
But the ship was hard to steer.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful story. I like the poem. The ocean have so many myths and stories that keep us yearning to be near her. I like the story of the water nymph. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[The Water Queen]

Some divilish nymph there. almost mermaidish

[Subjective Sanity]

LOL! Very clever. I love the way you ended it. : )