Sweet Intoxication

It has been awhile since I wrote about love so here you go

Arrows are being shot right at the heart

Love invading the blood and the veins

Composing beautiful melodic art

 

The air swirls with passion and desire

Enveloping the unsuspecting brain

The soul now drenched in lustful heated fire

 

Intoxicated by the feeling inside

Sensations of blissful sweetness cause

Splendor and physical rapture combine

 

The pulsing heart begins to rapidly beat

When feathery touches caress the skin

Two separate tongues fluidly meet               

 

 

Reviews

[Jibey]

This is a rmantic view of love - and it sizzles with emotion and longing... I liked the 'two tongues that fluidly meet' - indicating that the passion is a communion of bodies as well as minds... How nice to be so drenched!

[Linear]

That last stanza was a clincher for me, well done romantic love

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

Very nice =D
It has the sweet tender feeling about it as it builds and caresses the reader. The rhyming scheme added to the whole atmosphere.

[Steve]

Dang! this one made be blush! lol

[Cheryl J. Turner]

This is a splendid piece of writing - Touching...

[Katie Louise Hughes]

This is full of depth and so much detail it's amazing :) love the title, because your words intoxicate! lol. Good job!!

[Nothing Personal]

Wow oho..You are on fire Krissy. What an ending line..I shouldn't be reading your poems right now, at this time of the night that is..But a wonderful poem about love and its immediate repercussions..

[OT]

ahh very nice! an effortless rhyme as always - it all flows so well - the story rippling and bouncing off of the words - really like the first and second stanzas in particular! but they're all great!! nice!

[Kat Plunkett]

Awe this was really good.: )

[SpokenWord]

Like a fine wine the beginning of love is so intoxicating that it is a treasure to hold and remember. Very sweet poetry to lift the spirit.