Sweet Intoxication

It has been awhile since I wrote about love so here you go

Arrows are being shot right at the heart

Love invading the blood and the veins

Composing beautiful melodic art

 

The air swirls with passion and desire

Enveloping the unsuspecting brain

The soul now drenched in lustful heated fire

 

Intoxicated by the feeling inside

Sensations of blissful sweetness cause

Splendor and physical rapture combine

 

The pulsing heart begins to rapidly beat

When feathery touches caress the skin

Two separate tongues fluidly meet               

 

 

Reviews

[Amanda Dawn Sanderson-G..]

Hm... intoxicating. I'd pinpoint a favorite line but that would take deep thought and concentration as the entire poem struck me with beauty and greatness. You're got the touch of a poet and a pulsating heart of a sweet intoxication.

[Tate Morgan]

So beautiful how the poet sees what the average do not yet both look at the same things

[just rose.]

So sensual and secret and supernatural ... nicely done!

[Ladysue]

oh nice work here...good images and pleasure to read...nice flow too...

[Moflo]

I liked this a lot! Your images are fantastic and your wording really helped bring out your theme of love. It was a fun read, keeps the reader hooked through the end. Nice work.