Individual Absorption

A tidal wave of emotions that spans across time and distance in a magnetic pull through the year.

In the quiet moments

When the world slumbers

One name shimmers

Across the mind

Chanting its melody

Of distance and time

 

Beckoning to the heart

To bridge the space

Yelling deep inside

You know you want to

Simply touch his face

 

Spring forth

Set in motion

What the soul

Has been yearning for

Let two beings become

One whole

 

Enjoy the pull

Of magnet proportions

Connect two spirits

With individual absorption    

 

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

full of emotion.......beautifully written.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Very heartfelt ...a great title...wonderful poem . The last verse reads like a prayer .
You write so well.

Chloe

[Tim]

Deep. The nature of bonding together with someone is a powerful experience. The words absorption and magnet are perfect words to describe it. Wonderful writing as always.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Ah, the sweet imagery and inclined nature of the words, strike at the heart my darling, well done, good read.

[Tina Kline]

Love the imagery, it enhances the whole poem. It reads well. Love has a most extraordinary power and when two people love each other, that power is endless. A brilliant poem!

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. When two people find a right path. Can lead to unlimited dreams and roads. I like the places you took me with your words. A powerful ending to a amazing poem.
Coyote

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I really like the rhyme scheme on this. It was simple but powerful. Very well done!

[Jibey]

'shimmers across the mind'... the one whose presence remains a given in the consciousness... where distance lends enchantment to the view... and the magnetic yearnings pull the emotions inexorably... Beautifully composed...

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Loving the synergy here. This bond is incredible.
It's magic could only be born from the minds of the most romantic.
What a beauty.