She was beautiful.

Free-verse love poem.

SHE WAS BEAUTIFUL.

I saw her and she took my breath away
And she inhaled my exhilaration
For she was beautiful
No heart beat so strong in consideration
Of a quickening start, that a look
Was for the art of her and the ingenuity
Of a finest creator
She breathed me in and exhaled me out
In a flamed fluid of intricate love
And she was beautiful

For her darling vanity
Was my heart panicked to a full infusion
Of high emotive spirit
And I gasped aloud as her look
Lodged in my throat and was choking me
Precious love was a strangle that gripped
And held to a sweet tightening
For she was beautiful
And it was her beauty which took advantage
Of my gasped emotion

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

I suppose we all have been swept away by a womans beauty. Oh is their anything more grand than the humility a beauty bestows ?

[ron s king]

What more can stop the breath and give such change to the nature of man? Thank you, Tate for your comment... Ah. women, bless 'em all!...Ron.