The Art Of Love

A poem I wrote for an ex.

Love is a woven tapestry
It must be treated with care
If you mistreat the one you love
Then love will form a tear

I sit here shattered like a fallen sculpture
never to stand tall once again
treated as nothing by the love of my life
my lover, my dearest sweet friend

The art of love though masterpieces at first
with it's shades it's warm undertones
once hung on the wall now discarded away
now broken, forgotten, alone.

Maybe someday I will be found again
for I'm locked away collecting dust
Can someone restore the art of pure love
Grounded in happiness, foundations of trust.

Author's Note

I hope you like this.

Reviews

[Sunny]

Wow! this is really good!

[Konigin]

Aiden!!!!!!! This is really good!!!!!!! :D Is this the first one you've ever written??? O.o

[Aiden Christopher Pafford]

Yes. It's. About my breakup saturday

[Konigin]

Awwwwwwwww. :( I am sorry. Are you alright?

[Aiden Christopher Pafford]

I guess

[Konigin]

I hope that things get batter for you Aiden.

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

I really like the vivid imagery in this piece and they way you shared your heart and pain with the audience so freely and gave us a completely honest idea of what you believe love to be. Amazing write.


P.s. Thank you for helping Shadows Ember

[Shadows Ember]

This is absolutely amazing! I love the way the reader feels how you feel. It says a lot and overall is a very spectacular piece (:

[misha]

This is sweet but very heartbreaking. Great write!

[Amanda Worthington]

I like it. The idea is nicely put and easy to understand and the poem flows well. Very nicely written.

[Aiden Christopher Pafford]

Thank you.