who you are

A romantic poem

Loving you in every way
A song sung in my heart
A treasure in my very life
A priceless work of art

A myriad of sweetness
You captivate my soul
Everything about you amazing
My passion lost control

You are everything special to me
You are my heart my soul my all
You are a choir singing sweetly
You are an angel's pleasant call

My love you are my perfection
Your the light that shines the way
You are my heaven my hell my soul my all
My love for all my days

Angelic wonder come to me
You are everything it's true
You are so sweet and wonderful
No one compares to you

My heart has never taken flight
My soul never seen God
That is until you came to me
Now I stand in wonder and awe.

I am proud to call you angel
My love for all the times
Forever I am immortal
With your hand holding mine

Just know this for certain
My love will ever last
For you are my present and my future
You have healed me from my past!

Reviews

[Lost in Wonderland]

This is a poem of sheer passion and awe for this person you love. I think the strongest line was this one, "You are my heaven my hell my soul my all," because of the perfectly balanced juxtaposition. I think that brought reality into your work with the use of contrasting hyperbolic metaphors-- ironic but lovely!

[Octavious]

I enjoyed how you describe the emotion and not the personality of the girl, you also found a way to make this poem more or so as a coming of age poets perspective, which I admire very much, this piece is beautiful, and the rhymes aren't juvenile or cliche in any way, shape, or form so well done, and thank you so much for sharing your work.