Incomprehensible

sonnet variant in tetrameters

 

Incomprehensible.

 

Some say there’s only energy

 vibrating differentially.

It’s all illusion that we see.

This idea really baffles me

This point of view is nothing new

the eastern mystics thought so too.

If it is true then it would seem

that everybody shares one dream.

Which seems to me illogical.

I find it rather comical

 Hilarious in the extreme.

Some one or something has to dream.

Without a dreamer there could be

 no dream; It follows logically.

 

Friday, 11 December 2009

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Reviews

[Hello, Goodbye]

Great poetry.. I love the flow of the narration, the sing song aspect to it. Yet, I'm also captivated by the visual that it ends up producing. I loved it. Nay I forget that I also love any poem that includes dreams in its themes..

[deeps]

This is wonderful and cute really! I like this alot. Very well stated and written.
You are a true master or words and very poetic.

[R.R.Louderback]

Your poesy is flawless as always. Well, as usual.

Interesting concepts. I want to think about this one.

The lines
"Without a dreamer there could be
no dream; It follows logically."
intrigues me. A deep thought well expressed.