NOW

NOW is the time that i start to relize who i've become

NOW is the time to find where to start my life

NOW is the time when i start to take responsibility for my actions

NOW is the time where i live for today and not tomorrows satisfaction

NOW is the time that i become free

NOW i can begin my life as a new because NOW i understand WHAT I NEED TO DO TO BE ABLE TO MAKE IT through

TO BE STRONG

TO BE FREE

TO LIVE

TO SUCCEED

TO LOVE

TO BE HAPPY

I have to be able to climb the highest mountain to show that i can make it on any high level life might throw at me.

 

 

Reviews

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

I have been reading many works of poetry and some have been too bad to comment on and still be a nice person..you are just 15 and yet you do already understand that poetry is about expression and art and it has to be real ..your poem is real..so I give you Hats and Horns and confetti.

[vibe0ne]

this poem was very intricate, delicate, i liked it. the color addition actually makes this even better than it would be originally. for not calling yourself a poet you do write like one. good job.

[No]

i really like that you incorporated color into this,
although its not a very detailed poem that really makes you think, it brings about the same emotion as one that would.
i respect you for this, not many people can come face to face with themselves and make a statement of independence like this, and i think that it shows great things about you.

keep doing what you're doing and thinking the way you're thinking.
please,
:) julia