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Life simply Sucks. Period.

Life simply Sucks. Period.

A Poem by mae-mae<3

If Silence is golden

Why haven't your lips stop moving?

If Love is wholesome

Why am I broken?

If you're a Good Person

Why do you keep hurting me?

If this World is so Great

Why are we living in hell?

If no one cares

Why even bother?

So I'm gonna say this once

Loud and clear

Life simply sucks.

Period.

© 2009 mae-mae<3


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This is clever, the contradictions of life and love... Good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I often thought this in life, good way of potraying the ideas of this poems.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I am so glad you won with this! It does say something powerful! I loved it. Good anologies or whatever you call them. :]

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really liked it. It had strong points and I could actually visualize your facial expressions as if you were saying it to me. Great, keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


It's really good. You make some very good points.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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