Sundays

perfect Sunday morning!

You tell me I'm silly

I tell you you're fine

I say you're beautiful

You say I'm losing my mind

 

Waking on Sunday, I saw your face

Sleeping so peaceful, nothing could take the place

of the wonder you stirred in me

Waking beside me, you smile, we kiss

Sunday morning is something I wouldn't miss

for all the gold in this world

 

I can tell everything gonna be just fine

no need for worry

I can tell you think I'm losing my mind

All is well I promise

Nothing could hurt on a day like this

 

Lovemaking on Sunday, I saw your face

smiling so sweetly, nothing could take the place

of the sweet joy you stirred in me

Two joined as one, moving together

Sunday morning wishing it could be forever

Things like this should not stop ever

 

 

I can tell everything gonna be just fine

no need for worry

I can tell you think I'm losing my mind

All is well I promise

Nothing could hurt on a day like this

 

Some people say All good things must end

But I don't believe it's true

Now how about you?

Worryin'

Once again

About something you cannot change

Why would you trade a grand moment

for thoughts of a yesterday?

I prefer to believe all endings

are just new beginnings

and good times are here to stay.

 

 

 

I can tell everything gonna be just fine

no need for worry

I can tell you think I'm losing my mind

All is well I promise

Nothing could hurt on a day like this

 

 

 

You tell me I'm silly

I tell you you're fine

I say you're beautiful

You say I'm losing my mind

Reviews

[Helen Woodward]

These sound like lyrics, are they? I liked your prose, but feel it suffers a little with the use of colloquial language...on the other hand if they are lyrics the repitition/slang would work. You make beautiful points that most would identify with, sunday mornings are wonderful with the right person...
Helen :-)

[RareRed]

You tell me I'm silly

I tell you you're fine

I say you're beautiful

You say I'm losing my mind


I love those lines....sounds like my boyfriend and myself talking to each other so it kind of gets to my heart. I'm sure it will get to a few others too. Thanks for sharing it with me. As always, I love to read your work. Glad you've posted a new one! Keep writing!!!!!

[Noel]

That was beautiful, I loved it. Great write. ;D