A Defying Figure

A short poem about a vampire preying on an innocent teenager.

Standing like an inanimate object,

So perfect.

Ready to pounce on a new young victim,

So unfair.

 

Eyes with opposing domination,

So treacherous.

One kiss then one simple bite,

So...

Dead.

Author's Note

This is one of my first poems from my first semester at University. Please let me know what you think x

Reviews

[My Friend Pops]

the first thought was of an owl, then, I thought maybe a walking stick (phasmids).
the Vampire threw me

[Alex Carter]

I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. Though I must say I am a bit of a fan of morbid humor, so maybe that is not what you meant. Nevertheless its a great piece. :)