Ticking Clocks

Ticking Clocks

A Poem by ErinLovesYou<3

I never said I was afraid
Consider that I'm feeling betrayed
Oh how I wish you could have refrained

The clocks chime
I'm starting to feel left behind
Don't you see that that wasn't fine?

You don't know this place
But its okay there's not enough space for you and I
I'm running out of time
Oh please tell me isn't this divine?

The hourglass is full
And I'm feeling like a fool
I should have known we would never be cool

Written on June 28, 2010 *(7-28-10)*

© 2011 ErinLovesYou<3


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Awww sad but well written! And I have to agree with Rose Tyler, some things are just not meant to happen.

Posted 12 Years Ago


You do have a unique rhyme. i liek it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


The sands of time slip away from us all, and some things just are not meant to happen.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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ErinLovesYou<3
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