Watercolored stones

Watercolored stones

A Poem by ErinLovesYou<3
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Inspired by Roses by Poets of the Fall &Someone special

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Paint me the colors of the sky
Come on now don't be shy
Make sure the stars comply

I'll walk the distance
If you need my assistance
I'll show no resistance

So when your crying alone
I won't postpone
Its set in stone

Your exactly what I've been looking for
Right down to the core
There's nothing I want more

Written on June 2, 2011 *(6-2-11)*

© 2011 ErinLovesYou<3


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"Your exactly what I've been looking for
Right down to the core
There's nothing I want more" Very nice lines these...very!
But I didn't understand "So when your crying alone
I won't postpone
Its set in stone"
If you'd kindly care to explain?
Thx

Posted 12 Years Ago


Dear Erwin.. (: I loved this one, and like that guy said the title is simply amazing, I find my titles are sometimes silly and just straight to the point, I wasn't sure what to expect with yours.. - Lovely write mahh dear :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like your style. Plus, you picked a wonderful title for this, something that can be difficult to do.

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Amazing poetry here. I really loved the rhyming. Very deft writing indeed!

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

It's wonderful, Just like all of your other writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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ErinLovesYou<3
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Norwich, CT



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