Stay close to me

You make me smile, like there''s no tomorrow
You're as cute as a child, my emotions go wild
I'd like to kiss you, but that might make me miss you

People always say things are too good to be true
Well honey, you haven't made me feel blue
So I pray that in time, you'll let me be with you

I'm not going to leave
Because you are the air that I breathe
And I'd like to keep you, close to me

I like you more than you know
It's not something I can control
I'd walk through the rain and the snow, just to hold you close

Written on July 4,2011 *(7-4-11)*

Reviews

[Kestrova]

The first line has a small mistake (there's, not their's) but it doesn't detract from the piece, which really captivates. I love the third stanza the most though; it's short but sweet and drives the meaning across strongly. :) Another amazing poem!

[Sujash I. Purna]

Mellow and rich! This has a very beautiful rhyming pattern! Really loved reading it! You have a great talent Erin! Very good work here!