Unwanted Baby

I am a part of you now,

Forever,

Like your dreary dreams.

Thought you'd get away so easy, 

Ha, 

What did you think getting in 'trouble' meant, 

Mother? 

Reviews

[Crowley]

Oh this is sharp and so full of reality makes me want to burst at the seems, with a smile because of the great writing and with revenge for some reason because of the subject matter. Great stuff, I really thought this was hit right out of the ball park.

[Siddhartha]

Damn to the point...Damn... Painful, painful this...And the pain just sears and tears and bursts out at the seams...Thanks a lot Serah for pushing me to read this...

[TTBoy28]

Of course, I can relate to this...

[em]

- oh my - this is a searing pain!!! - powerful - intense - and biting! - striking - absolutely!! - i agree with serah - and thank her - for guiding me in the direction of this brilliant piece here! -

[MuSe Ampoule]

Striking piece. very powerful. Thanks Serah, for the suggested reading.

[OT]

hmm a powerful write for sure!!

Edit: how rubbish was that review! sorry a re-review! this has a powerful poignancy to it - the notion of trouble is well played on here - you cannot escape the errs of your past they latch to your shadow and follow you on this walk of life! a very nice write!!

[paul]

wow. stunning

[Alicante lullaby]

This indeed is painful...a painful experience...helplessness that kills since i relate to the experience...

[Isolophobe]

I first read the poem itself and was a bit dazed with bewilderment and empathy, then I read the title and it shook me awake. pain so immense I think I prefer the daze.

[.]

. ah, that's stunning beyond measure ... powerful ... so very powerful ... unbelievable ...