Colors..

There is a black hole 

In every red heart 

Flows out of it; crimson hues 

And fills brown body parts 

Through dark green eyes 

Watches the yellow brain 

Rivers running blue 

And stars shining in silvery May

Stunning orange sun rise in the heaven 

Spreading golden bliss 

On cold grey hearts 

Colorful people construe rainbows 

With vibrant dyes of life 

reproduce pink 

floating in the turquoise bliss

Are violet feathers of peace 

Harmony in colors 

just like an orchestrated symphony 

Red, Blue or Green - They all sing a song 

They sing with life 

They sing to life 

Only the soul;

So impeccably white

Stands alone with a chance to hear the melody. 

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

stunningly beautiful.....Art is what it is

[PP]

Thank you Dr. Wood :)

[Mayur Sadhu]

A colorful projection of various aspects of the Nature. Loved it. :)

[PP]

Thank you Mayur :)

[khalid]

woww..what a colorful, cheerful, optimistic poem,,i loved all the colors you used to paint this piece of art..i just wonder, have you used a pen to write a poem or you have used feathers and colors to draw a nice painting?

[PP]

I am well and truly flattered with your review Khalid! Thank you..Guess poetry is nonetheless an art as good as painting a picture don't you think so?

[khalid]

yes i do..if i didnt think so before, i think so now after reading your poem..

[PP]

awww thank you again Khalid, I am privileged :)

[khalid]

you have the right to..

[PP]

:)

[critic h]

a great way to look at the colours and the way you took me to places with the flow of words. a beautiful presentation of the colours of life. I read it twice and thanx for it. and the last line is serving the elevator. its good.

[PP]

Thank you so much and I am so glad you liked it! Colours can take you to different heights..glad you experienced it :)

[Frieda P]

What a way to look at colors, you've taken me a whole new route.

Through dark green eyes
Watches the yellow brain
Rivers running blue

I'll never see yellow quite the same again! Lovely, thanks for this one.

[PP]

hahaha..yellow has got a bit of personality now! Thank you Frieda for your ever so nice review :)

[Frieda P]

I always associate it with the sun, now I'm got brain matter! Lol

[Frieda P]

Your brain must be brilliant and light!

[PP]

hahahaha!!! lady this is hilarious..now I have the faintest idea why I addressed brain as yellow, but looking back guess when you get an idea and the brain is light up bright its radiant yellow! lol

[Frieda P]

I don't know, that's unique, I always think 'grey'...I must have a bad attitude! ;-)

[PP]

Bad attitude hahahaha!! Anatomically grey matter makes us believe that brain is grey but I don't think so..guess will have to tear apart someone's head to find out lol

[Frieda P]

Ha don't go in my head, you'll be sorry what you see! ;-P

[PP]

hahahaha...now I am even more interested !

[Frieda P]

You'll need a hazmat suit!! hahaha

[PP]

hahahahaha...!

[Frieda P]

Protective goggles and an instruction booklet if you can find one that insane! lol

[PP]

Sure I will grab that Insane Cut Open Frieda's Brain Manual beforehand lol

[Frieda P]

I think they're written in Braille...so no one can see! ;-P

[PP]

hahahahaha!!!!! I am dumbstruck now...your brain is definitely YELLOW!

[Frieda P]

:-D You just love me!

[Frieda P]

And you are crazy!! ;-P

[Coyote Poetry]

Great use of colors and thoughts. I had to read again for the pleasure of the words. I like the places you took me in the flow and harmony of the amazing poetry. Thank you.
Coyote

[PP]

Thank you Coyote for reading and for such a kind review, I am glad you enjoyed this poem :)

[DIVYA]

This poem carries in it all the colors of life Prathama. Very well written.

"Stunning orange sun rise in the heaven
Spreading golden bliss
On cold grey hearts "

Very well said. Thanks...

[PP]

Thank you ever so much Divya for your beautiful words, I am glad you enjoyed this :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very spiritually inviting... I could feel a calm presence come over me as I read it.

[PP]

Thank you Dale for liking this poem, that is what colors do to you :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is "impeccable" in its brilliant use of all the colors...

very creative...and the melody is a combination of all the colors...and it fuses into our minds...

nice work.

jacob

[PP]

Thank you so much Jacob, I am glad you enjoyed it :)