Shikayat

a complaint to god

mai teri likhi ik kitaab ha,

chahundi tere kolon ik jwaab ha.

kyu khali chhadeya te sada khushiyan wala panna ?,

kyu adhoori raih jandi hai meri hr tamanna ?.

dukha nal lagge purani sanjh koi,

hun humsafar lagge takleef moie.

mai teri likhi ik kitaab ha,

chahundi tere kolon ik jwaab ha.

Author's Note

thank you for stopping by

Reviews

[Deepak Belbase]

Poem bahut kaim c... but mennu second last pragraph che second line de end che "moie" likhiya a, oda meaning ki hai?

[preet bajwara]

deepak ji moie means buri

[prajakta]

Vadiya poem thi...thanks for sharing.vaise punjabi seekhadegi tumari poems mennu..:)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thank u . fir to mujhe or likhni chahiye

[Saddam]

Mainu tode naal bas ek hi galla hai, Ye to kamal di kalma hai.
That was great write here, some thing close and from the heart.
Love Its every stanza.

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thank u very much sir . nice punjabi

[Saddam]

Hahaha... just chill girl, no one is here sir or madam. we all are scholars, we learn from here.
read moreHahaha... just chill girl, no one is here sir or madam. we all are scholars, we learn from here.
You are welcome.

[Shubham Joshi]

I have only one word...not one millions fantastic, amazing lovely and punjabi rocks just as you do.

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thank you very much sir .ur word means alot to me. yes punjab,punjabi nd a punjaban always rocks

[Shubham Joshi]

Stop calling me sir, it is starting to irritate me. Main koyi sir var na hoon, main nanha muna rahi hoon, desh ka sipahi, don't call me sir, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease.

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

hahahah ok ok bt thn what should i call u . u r elder than me sir

[Pushkar Prabhat]

beautiful emotions........te lajawaab kavita........!!!! :) :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thank u sir. i alws wait for ur review

[Pushkar Prabhat]

ohh......i will try to be more swift then...........you are welcome!!! :) :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thank u once again sir

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Punjabi... just loved it... kuddos!!!

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thank you very much sir

[Abilash Uttama]

bahut badiya poem hai, kuch cheeze hume lagta hai ki sahi nahi hai lekin baad me jaake realize hota hai ki nahi wo sahi hi hua tha. Be optimistic :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thank you very much abhi

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

koi mistake to ni hai ??

[Abilash Uttama]

nahi yaar, punjabi me tu bahut badiya likhti hai

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

realy !! yes i also think after all its my mother tongue