jamie's evanescent

a poem written for someone i had to let go

grant me the sight of your heartfelt smile.

allow the soft petal of your soul'd vessel

curve the warmth of your spirit

a fathomless grimace will do

for me to have a last straw to reminisce you

i am letting you go..

lock me in a one-second embrace.

a serenity for a moment in a timeless universe;

a one-second eternity.

allow me to dwell in your warmth,

for one solid oblivion of darkness.

i am setting you free...

shed a tear for me as you glance for the last time

a seal to a long-forgotten memory.

kiss away the sweet torturing moments of our bliss,

leave the agony as it is.

your tear will give this heart its last fret.

i am giving you to the universe..

Reviews

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Very nicely done. You have a deep aspect to your writing that's very interesting.

allow the soft petal of your soul'd vessel
curve the warmth of your spirit

Wow!

Nice writing.

Pendragon.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very beautiful poem. Seconds become important with age. One last embrace and kiss leave us with good memory of love lost and missed. i loved how you used the language to create vision of desire and memory. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[princess elie]

thanks.. letting go is always a difficult thing to do.