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A by Rebecca
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im not done...just in class with nothing better to do..but the bell is going to ring soon!

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Tears began to flow my eyes, I knew who I needed to talk to,
I picked up my phone, pressed 2 and hit send.
He was on my speed dial, of course.
He answered with a happy hello,
but as soon as he heard my attempt to speak, he began to worry.
I could hear the worry in his voice when he asked "whats wrong, becca?"
That wasnt a unusual question for him to ask me,
but the answer he would recieve wasn't the usual answer I normally gave.
I didn't respond with "boys suck" or "my friends cause too much drama"
I tried to explain what had happened earlier that day.
I began crying harder and harder-- I could barely breathe, let alone speak.

© 2009 Rebecca


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You conveyed strong emotion in this piece and you left me hanging! Ahh! :) Great job! Keep up the good work :)

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Rebecca
Rebecca

mburg, PA



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Whaaaat up, kiddies. I haven't been on this thing since I was 15. Daaaang. Now 19, single & need to start writing again. more..

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