Power to dream..

We don’t have all the powers but we have the power to dream.

Despite being lost in the tempest all we have is the power to dream.

Losing hope, gaining sorrow is not what the heart screams.

The amazing heart of purity wants just to smile and to dream.

Thinking of pain and grief insane will just burn your skin plain.

Forget the past forget the pain think of future fantasy clean.

Dream of happiness, of freedom..Dream of your destiny.

Dream to the hearts glory cause nothing can stop you ever,

Nothing can ever snatch your power to dream..

Reviews

[GridLok]

While I take issue with some of the content … guess I've become somewhat disillusioned with dreams, your poetic structure continues to evolve successfully. I particularly liked the way in which the rhyming of the first four lines gives way to the free form of the rest of the poem. Did you notice that the last words of the final five lines can be arranged: "Plain clean destiny, ever (to) dream" … in itself a succinct statement of your poem.

[Dayran]

If you can dream it, you can live it. Nice write!

[Dove]

Extremely creative, love it... you're a great writer