'Beautiful Bashing..'

A poem written few years back..in its very raw format..

...

"A challenge so tough..

Should know, m rough..

Chasing happiness and joys..

Stay away..you boys..

M here to market..

Will knock the target..

None can change pre-written..

Show that you are work-smitten..

Valuable metals receive thrashing..

Results are beautiful bashing..!!!"

...

6th Oct., 2012

Reviews

[stars are far]

that was nice .. well done

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks stars are far..!!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the flow of words and thoughts. Poem was easy to read. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks Coyote Sir..!!

[Dayran]

An expression of will that is couched in the feminine touch of the gentle. Well said!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks Dayran..!!