'A Stranger..'

'A Stranger..'

A Poem by Priyankaabhilaashi
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Transformation of a Virtual Fantasy into a Realty..giving wings to a beautiful experience..!!'

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"Meeting a stranger on a hilly terrain..
Exchanging thoughts..opinions..eventually feelings..
Transforming the surrounding into Worlds' Loveliest Place..
With fruits of Care, Trust, Compassion..
Holding with comfort..
And showering by all possible measures..
Love..Affection..Love..Admiration..Love..
Wrenching the quest, only you can dare..
For clustering the heart-beats, is not a daily affair..
Mine oasis..My food for thought..
Settling deep..inhaling a gratifying lot..

Owe myself..My friend..
You gave my life, a lovely bend..!!"

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© 2010 Priyankaabhilaashi


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Oh Just toooooo Good. I am so impressed. I love the way you convey "Exchanging thoughts , opinions and eventually feelings" That is such an awesome way to say that i am falling in love. And we know when we fall in love, our surroundings appear far more beautiful than they are. And the lovely bend your life got. Its like one of those road movies where you meet, fall in love, and go back home with a warm heart. The imagery is perfect. Well Done

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Thank you Ms. stars are far..!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


really nice !!


Posted 12 Years Ago


Thank you Arsenic Nemesis..!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aw, this is so very sweet, I really liked the last line, wondeful. Nicely written and presented, good job mortal~~

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank You Cynthia..!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great Poem! I am amazed!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you Stefaine..!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aw a lover's tale and a beautifully written too... love the last part ' you gave my life, a lovely bend!!' that so uniques... well done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you..Coyote..!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like a good conversation. Sitting on hill. Exchanging ideas and thoughts would be a perfect day. Your poem is beautiful. I like the feel and logic of your words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Priyankaabhilaashi
Priyankaabhilaashi

Jaipur, India



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A traveller by choice..A writer by soul..!!!! A freelance writer..A Doctorate..A Management Graduate..!!!!! Born and brought up in Jaipur, The Pink City. You may read me here also: http://enri.. more..

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