'Pervade Me..'

'Reliving passion, maturity, understanding and sensitivity..!!'

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"As i breath and stand on the crossroad..

Leaves sway by, even the lightest load..

Whispering through the sieve of moonlight..

Intensity unravels the depth of height..

Deep intense rolling hills, often close doorways.. 

Sparkling Innocence scatter evenly on highways..

Gathering an extra pounce of power..

Dismantling an era of egoistic tower..

A bewildering bright beam reflecting landscape..

Do i need to unwrap for another escape..

Come back, My Pineapple Rainbow, let us stumble again..

Permit me, pervade me, gather me, transform me into rain..!!!"

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Reviews

[Randolf Ramos]

"As i breath and stand on the crossroad..
Leaves sway by, even the lightest load..
Whispering through the sieve of moonlight..
Intensity unravels the depth of height..
Deep intense rolling hills, often close doorways..
Sparkling Innocence scatter evenly on highways..
Gathering an extra pounce of power..
Dismantling an era of egoistic tower..
A bewildering bright beam reflecting landscape..
Do i need to unwrap for another escape..

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Great write!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Zeitgeist_Manifesto..!!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank You Jemma..!!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is some intense thought.
Gave me chills.

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i love that last line. i think the entire thing is just really good, but for some reason i can't tell i love that last line.Lol

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank You Randolf Ramos..!!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you..Serpent..!!!

[serpent]

wow! what a beautiful write... the imagery is excellent and the last two lines are beautiful beyond my words can express...
I feel lucky that i bumped into this write while randomly going through different poems...

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Ms. Stefanie..!!

[Stef Outsiders]

You craft words so well and painted a picture... I like that... well done!